I am a Year 6 student at Papakura Central School School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room khh and my teacher is whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Marcus, well done for trying your best to complete all tasks. I like how you showed your maths thinking for the questions. I enjoyed reading your writing for this week. I think it was great that you wrote your narrative about a drawing you had made. You have used a good mix of short and long sentences. One thing you can work on for next time is making sure you use tense correctly (chased instead of chase, looked instead of look).
Kia ora Marcus, well done for trying your best to complete all tasks.
ReplyDeleteI like how you showed your maths thinking for the questions.
I enjoyed reading your writing for this week. I think it was great that you wrote your narrative about a drawing you had made. You have used a good mix of short and long sentences. One thing you can work on for next time is making sure you use tense correctly (chased instead of chase, looked instead of look).